Loved the animation. You're an incredibly talented artist. Never stop drawing.
Thank you for the comment.
Less text, more animation
All that 'win lol' bullshit was cheesy as hell. You lost serious points there.
On the other hand, your animation skills are pretty decent. Keep practicing.
Intro too long, run cycles too poor
The intro threw me off -- the writing didn't grab my attention, and it really went on for too long. I needed superior animation to draw me back in, but I didn't get it. At least work on the run cycles so that they look acceptable. Flash movies on Newgrounds are short and abundant, so you really need to captivate your audience as quickly as possible if you're going to have a successful animation.
I'm mainly commenting because of your attitude, though. In one of your replies below, you basically said 'you shouldn't criticise someone's work unless you can do better.' That's a load of shit. If that were true, there would be no movie-critics, or art-critics, or anything-critics.
So how about you stop shitting all over peoples' criticisms, appreciate that someone took the time to view your movie at all, and listen to what they have to say? That's the only way you're going to improve.
Well, I do appreciate the ppl who REVIEW my flash...
Im asking for their time to spent it on COMMENTING my work NOT ABUSE it, kay?
The saying of Voice Actors quality r bad, that kinda lot of u so called Shit too, know?
I know my work r'nt perfect cuz I dint get any lesson of it...
But it doesnt deserve 3/10 OR 4/10, right?
3 or 4/10 is a blamming material.. and I want a review on my lfash, not a review for my "response"
Appreciate ur time, hope u'll spent it wisely. :)
Is this posted as a tutorial on a site somewhere? Because these are everywhere. Also, snake is incredibly trite and played out. Make something original and fun.
Fix the sound
The music overlaps itself whenever you start again. It just turns into a mixture of incomprehensible noise after the third time or so. Still, you're doing pretty well. Keep up the experimentation.
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