Loved the animation. You're an incredibly talented artist. Never stop drawing.
Thank you for the comment.
Less text, more animation
All that 'win lol' bullshit was cheesy as hell. You lost serious points there.
On the other hand, your animation skills are pretty decent. Keep practicing.
Intro too long, run cycles too poor
The intro threw me off -- the writing didn't grab my attention, and it really went on for too long. I needed superior animation to draw me back in, but I didn't get it. At least work on the run cycles so that they look acceptable. Flash movies on Newgrounds are short and abundant, so you really need to captivate your audience as quickly as possible if you're going to have a successful animation.
I'm mainly commenting because of your attitude, though. In one of your replies below, you basically said 'you shouldn't criticise someone's work unless you can do better.' That's a load of shit. If that were true, there would be no movie-critics, or art-critics, or anything-critics.
So how about you stop shitting all over peoples' criticisms, appreciate that someone took the time to view your movie at all, and listen to what they have to say? That's the only way you're going to improve.
Well, I do appreciate the ppl who REVIEW my flash...
Im asking for their time to spent it on COMMENTING my work NOT ABUSE it, kay?
The saying of Voice Actors quality r bad, that kinda lot of u so called Shit too, know?
I know my work r'nt perfect cuz I dint get any lesson of it...
But it doesnt deserve 3/10 OR 4/10, right?
3 or 4/10 is a blamming material.. and I want a review on my lfash, not a review for my "response"
Appreciate ur time, hope u'll spent it wisely. :)
Why is this tentacle rape bullshit so popular on Newgrounds? I mean, fuck.
Messed-up subject matter aside, the animation was really well done. You obviously put a lot of time and effort in to drawing those alien tentacle cocks.
Argh, My Ears
What's with the tremendously annoying sound loop? Replace that, and you'll improve your movie 100%.
I hope this stays at 'Episode 1 Part 1'
Please don't make any more of these. You have the potential to do a lot better, try to work on the story - and incorporate some actual humour.
Sorry, 'some gay guy' does not equal 'funny'.
i read the title as 'batlock', so i was kind of expecting a bat that also acted as an attorney during the day or something. anyway, the element of surprise together with a clock movie that stood just above the 11 bazillion clock movies that blow...i forget how i was going to end this. but you did pretty well anyway.
I could just speak negatively about this whole thing, but ive decided to give some tips instead:
1. learn to use flash
2. learn how to spell
It was better than i thought it would be. That phrase is getting a bit annoying now, but still, you did well.
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